Great sentence! Your format doesn't match what Dr. Strange outlined in the instructions, but you are off to a good start! You may come into the lab and re-record this at your earliest convenience, or you can redo it on your own if you include a title page before the clip of yourself, and fade to black at the end. Otherwise, GREAT WORK!
Yes, like Anthony I think this is a great sentence. Let us know and we can help you fix this in the lab. Stephen Akins